The piece is pretty solid. But the shoulder postions look off to how the sword is on him.
He sorta looks a bit stiff, and the shoulder feel like it should be more slanted down.
Other than that it's a nice piece for what it is.
Thank you for the observation! I did not make a previous sketch before painting so there are lot of things that may look off, And I'm sure that's not the only one--
It's nice to see him drawn when he's more serious. You really show it in this piece very well, the overall shading helps show it, I'd be interested to see this colored but this is pretty sick artwork as it is.
Was this done tradtionally or digitally? Cause the inking is great! Also notice you put porn in the tag hahah.
This is really drawn out well. I can see that it's ice blasting out, ice can be hard to draw out when your trying to make it not look like a crystal. But I'm not 100% about the pacing of time on the 2nd page. I'll just say what I might able to tell.
(1st panel is ice shards falling down in front of the hero/swordsman ,again for the 2nd panel, step forward for the 3rd panel and pause for the 4th panel.)
Not sure if I got that right, but it feels like a really slow passage of time right there. But if you are going for it I'm sure you will make it have a good purpose. Not saying everything has to be fast paced just that when time slows down like that it makes me feel like something major is going to happen.
But well drawn out and can't wait to see more!
Thanks for your comment! This is definitely rushed not denying that. Haha. This was a school assignment that asked us to make a 5 page comic. Haha. I wish I had more pages.
Oh crap Mandy is smileing! The world is going to break in halve again!
Joke aside cool work dude!
I just love this haha! That simple attack was great. Awesome work dude!
The lines on this are sick :D , and your use of watercolors ( It looks like water color) is wonderful!
I also really like how the cigarette smoke color is purple. It defiantly gave it a better sense of being death.(Besides the smoke skull you made)
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